This was for me one of the easier Everymen, and some clues were really good.
But consider these clues:
Topless – impertinence – starting again! (10)
Detective Inspector, cop, old copper, last thing in obnoxiousness: dinosaur! (10)
Outstanding isle for exile: constantly speak up (7)
I lament that Everyman solvers — especially beginners — are missing one of the very best parts of the cryptic solving experience: Smooth surface meanings.
I recognize the difficulty of writing a new cryptic every week.
But these clues, and many, many other Everyman clues, utterly lack a coherent surface sense. (Almost any sequence of word can trigger an image, but that's not what cryptic crosswords are about.)
I strongly recommend that beginning Everyman solvers widen their scope and attempt cryptic puzzles from other venues (like Games magazine and this cache of many cryptics:
https://www.fleetingimage.com/wij/puzzles/cru/, which uses the freely downloadable and innocuous Across Lite crossword software).