Norah, Admin, here, Pierrot. This Forum isn’t the place for adding your own puzzles BUT, in the interests of helping a newcomer to setting, I am prepared to let you set up a new thread headed something like “Cryptic Clues by New Setter”. You could then add one or two clues, no more than 4 in a post to avoid overload, and see what response you get.
You could ask for advice on the suitability of your clues for a cryptic puzzle and offer to post the answers in, say, 5 days time.
I don’t normally encourage this type of thread over the weekend as it’s the busy time on the Forum but in this case I think it would be better to post then as you would attract the “weekenders”.
Say, post on Thursday with the answers posted on the following Tuesday.
You may get advice from other Members on the best way forward for your clues.
PS I speak as someone who can’t even do the simple Daily Mail puzzle, the parsing of cryptic clues totally baffles me but the reasoning is very interesting.