Apologies for the second O, which was an aberration - the last five should be D (fish not dish in 20D), O (rats not rots in 22D), F (tree not free in 23 D), R (pack not park in 25D) and M (run not rum in 28D).
I still have no idea what to do next - somebody in the Answerbank has said that 'As far as the theme and the 2 extra letters, there is really only one "elsewhere" where they can be applied to "clarify the theme".' Oh really - I have been staring at this for three days now and I have absolutely no idea what is required!