Welcome regardless, Wakeling...
Sunray, 6 substitutes A of Sag with now; 8 is anagram of 33 without T; 31 surrounds a castle, worker is man.
You're right, there are different versions of the verse online. Very misleading. My ODQ has 1st line : 4,7,5,3,7,3; 2nd line 2-3 (though in the case of this puzzle it is 2-4); 3rd line begins 2-4, 2-4...